You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much

Dear Sara, I am writing
this
letter to you to express my
thank
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for your
offer
.
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Unfortunately
Unfortuntly
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Unfortunately
, I cannot get
this
offer
and go to your
company
. I received your
offer
which
ask
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me to work in your
company
from
nest
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next
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Monday. I noticed that your
company
is located in
other city
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another city
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where
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which
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is far away from my house. That means if I work in your
company
, I have to get up early
,
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and drive about 2 hours to get to your shop. I do not want to spend lots of time on the road.
This
is the reason that I have to decline
this
offer
. I am so sorry about
this
,
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and thank you for your help to give me
this
opportunity. Meanwhile, I don’t want to change my current job right now.I have been working in
current
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my current
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company
as a machinist for 10 years. The environment of
workplace
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the workplace
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is very nice, and all the co-works are friendly and helpful.
Therefore
, I like
this
job very much and want to work in it until
retire
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. Thank you again for your
offer
. I hope you can find other people who
is
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are
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suitable for your job. Yours sincerely, Kevin
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