Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career… It is said: "A woman’s place is in the home." What do you think

Globalization has changed gender differences and united them equally, but somewhere it is thought that females are known as being housewives and they should return to their traditional roles,
although
they are doing many struggles that men are unable to do. I will discuss my opinion with relevant examples that girls are removing the housewife tag during
this
modern period. To commence with, In recent years,
women
have involved themselves in social participation, politics, employment and leadership as inflation is increasing day by day and
people
do not have enough revenue to fulfil their
families
' needs due to a single person's income. In another word, girls are willing to
work
to help their partner accomplish their kid's dreams and provide them good education for their bright future as well as they
work
at home too.
For instance
, global news has shown that 75% of parents are sending their kids to daycare because they both have jobs and these numbers are rising year to year due to the high price of everything and
people
do not have a choice.
Moreover
,
people
who lack education are not appreciating
women
's efforts and do not have strong relationships with their wives.
Secondly
, a number of
women
reached the top and got success in their life and
people
still remember them and read about them in the books
such
as Kalpana Chawla who went to the moon and accomplished her dream if she kept concerned about
people
what they would say
then
she would not be in every science book.
For example
, It has been globally shown that 20% of
people
do not value
women
's
work
in the house and do not allow them to job outside.
As a result
, they are living in poverty and do not have good relationships with their partners. In conclusion, giving freedom to girls allows men to live peacefully with their
families
as they both will be earning some money and giving their
families
an opportunity to fulfil their needs and a male would be entitled to respect from their wife by giving them the chance to
work
outside.
In addition
, the divorce rate will be fallen if
women
get some respect from their
families
.
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