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Many students are choosing not to study science in universities.what are the causes for that.what are the effects on the society

Learners
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 at the stage of undergrad are commonly found unwilling to take
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science based
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 courses. The level of
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 and passion required to study scientific subjects,
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 often find worthless which in turn causes
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 nation to suffer. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will be explaining the details
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 the causes and impact of indifference in studying
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learners
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 to have
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 and
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 understanding of mathematics, physics and so on which many
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 find difficult to learn.
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, studying computer
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 requires one to study a lot of mathematical equations along with
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 to solve problems which most
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students
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 lack and
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 avoid choosing
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 programs in the universities.
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, the country faces
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a lack
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 of professionals in
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 field and other services like providing health safety,
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 safety. Another point worth mentioning is that many
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 barely understand the importance of studying
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science
since
scince
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science
. To be more specific, what
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benefit
benefits
benfit
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benefit
 may come from studying
science
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 is often not clearly explained to them. If
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 are not well informed about the
scopes
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 of their learnings they will simply go for business studies thinking it is the only thing that can bring financial returns to them.
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, one of my friends once
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regretted
 saying she would have studied Bio-
chemestry
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chemistry
 if she knew it better before.
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, dissatisfaction
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society
socitey
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society
suffer
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suffers
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 as these dissatisfied souls do not provide proper
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services
sevices
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services
 in future. To conclude, it can be reiterated that
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 of understanding and reluctance leads
students
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 not to study
science
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, it
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 important to make a clear vision
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 scientific applications
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the
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young
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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