One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is known, nowadays, that cities around the world constantly grow in population,

therefore

,

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amount of cars on

roads

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increased

incresed

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increased

in recent years as well.

However

,

this

tendency leads to the problem

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traffic

congestions

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. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on the causes of

this

and suggest

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possible

posible

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possible

ideas that could potentially solve the issue.

Firstly

, almost every big

city

has an issue with

roads

plannings. In fact, together with a

city

's

growth

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there is a legacy from previous versions of the

city

. As long as new objects are constructed, they need to be connected with

remaining

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part of the

city

by

roads

.

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plan, in turn, is required to avoid

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challenges

challeges

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challenges

on the

city

roads

.

For example

, if Astana, the capital of Kazakhstan, were planned by good urbanists and engineers, it would have fewer traffic congestions,

in contrast

, Uralsk being the

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capital

capatial

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west Kazakhstan has never had cars issues due to

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planning system.

That is

, a possible solution, which would improve the situation, is to plan a

city

roads

system beforehand thinking about its potential growth.

Secondly

, citizens of large cities usually have fixed working

hours

,

hence

, a majority of the public is busy at the same.

Moreover

, most of them use cars in order to come to work, which, in turn,

results

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traffic congestion.

For instance

, London

being

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known for its big number of

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companies at the centre has road issues at the peak time when employees of

such

companies come to work. I think that uniform distributed working

hours

for all citizens could solve the problem and get rid of peak times. In conclusion, I would say that there are at least two big reasons for the problems

on

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large cities'

roads

:

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unsufficient

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roads

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plannings as well as biased working

hours

.

However

, priorly designed road

system

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systems

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together with

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working

hours

for

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employees

emploees

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employees

should solve the issues.