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Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #life #university #education
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It is generally argued that entering a
university
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 is considered the most effective method to flourish in
life
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;
however
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, some disagree with
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 statement. Personally, I am of the opinion that there are two sides
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this
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 issue. Regarding
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success without
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getting
gettingg
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getting
 a
university
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education
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, one
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 that would be
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mentioning
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 is talent would surpass degrees.
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, there might be some occupations which prefer what workers perform to what they study in schools.
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,
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recruits a candidate
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not based on his/her artwork applied.
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, a multitude of employees
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 general jobs still could not only receive lucrative salaries but
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 widen their career prospects.
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, human beings who do not experience campus
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 have more opportunities to explore their true directions. That means it is time for them to enjoy
a great deal of
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 social activities that allow them not only to practice soft skills
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 as collaboration and leadership but
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 to establish new social bonds.
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,
those
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one could know what exactly
benefit
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 them and what their strong points are. In fact, many
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start – up
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 companies run by business owners lacking
of
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university
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 degrees still bloom in success and let’s take Facebook as a typical instance.
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, some opposing ideas are put forward. Nobody would think of
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questioning
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 that knowledge conveyed in
university
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 is the most crucial
methods
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 for employees to obtain their accomplishments in
life
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. To put it differently, college students accumulate specialized
theory – oriented
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 lessons taught by renowned
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lecturers
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lectures
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lecturers
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 with a wealth of experience
that is
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arduously
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 to find in unprofessional ways.
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, applicants graduating from prestigious universities gain precious competitive advantages due to their degrees, especially
professions
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in professions
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 requiring academic background, and
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education
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 section is believed to be a quintessence. Vietnamese teachers receiving comprehension
education
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 easily get
highly
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 appreciation from employers compared to amateurs because those are willing to involve in cooperation without
exra
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extra
tranining
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training
 courses.
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, opponents suppose that applying to prominent institutions would be
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 because not only do student just study cliché theories but they
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lacks
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practical skills
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 as communication and critical thinking; while people do not
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 in
university
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 they could gain above – mentioned abilities. Yet, it is only a fallacy. It is manifest that apart from knowledge, college students have chances to build up necessary skills for their future jobs through courses in schooling curricula and do not run a high risk of
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committing
commiting
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 to any threats because professors give them repercussions and solutions when they involve in given circumstances.
That people
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 not joining in academic
instructions
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 have to pay a heavy toll to gain;
on
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 the worst scenario, they would die. In conclusion, in the views of
aforementioned
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 arguments, my unshakable
convinction
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conviction
 is getting
university
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 is the
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go – to
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 technique to succeed in
life
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 due to academic
education
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.
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 individuals might still find out other methods to achieve their goals, they might suffer from failure and danger as well in order to shed
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 the light.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university degree
  • specialized knowledge
  • critical thinking skills
  • networking opportunities
  • vocational training
  • self-made entrepreneurs
  • gig economy
  • online courses
  • certifications
  • formal education
  • practical experience
  • lifelong learning
  • career goals
  • individual circumstances
  • academic qualifications
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