You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain why your apartment would be a good living place for a student • describe the room you have for rent

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter regarding renting a room in my flat which is just a 2-miles away from the University. I am Jenny and I have been living in an apartment which is in the West Hill community for 4 years. In

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regard, I want to mention that I am staying in a 2 bedroom flat which is spacious and convenient to live in. So, I want to share my flat with any student who wants to live in private accommodation. As it is just a few miles away from the college it would be a great place to live.

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apartment has a private library and a study hall which is absolutely free to use.

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, the room has an attached bathroom and a balcony with a lot of space to sit and relax in the evenings. The flat is well ventilated

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, it is considered as the best choice for students to live. I anticipate a positive response from you as early as possible. Yours sincerely, P.Jenny.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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