The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the blend of the generation in Italy and Yemen in 2000,
in
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they
also
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make predictions about possible changes in 2050. Looking from an
overall
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perspective we can say that in both countries there is a tendency to shorten the
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of younger ones
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the population. When we analyzed data from 2000 in Yemen, first
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of
all, we noticed that half of society was represented by children from 6 to 14
years
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old. Around 46.3 % were
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of 15 to 59
years
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, and the smallest
number
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was shown by those who were over 60
years
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old. The projection for
this
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country is increasing the
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of elderly
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5,7%. The vast majority,
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in the chart around 57.3%, will be represented by the group of adults and adolescents. At the same time, there will be a possibility of decreasing the
number
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of infants. In
Italy
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in the past
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we noticed that more than
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half were individuals between 15 to 59
years
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.
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,we must admit that the
number
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of older people ,which was around a quarter, was much bigger in comparison to those in Yemen.
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part of the population in
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2000 were children. The main prediction for 2050 is that there will be a tendency to increase the
number
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of people over 60
years
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and
decline
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a decline
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in the group of infants.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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