Some people think that people moving to a new country should accept new culture in the foreign country. Others think that they should live as a separate minority group with different lifestyles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
say that when people
moving
to a new country, they should acknowledge their shelves with the Wrong verb form
move
exist
Change the form of the verb
existing
culture
. However
, others believe that it can be understanding
if Wrong verb form
understood
people
choose to live differently as a minority. For
Change preposition
Me
me
, I agree that Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
need to Add an article
an allowed
allowed
new Wrong verb form
allow
culture
to adapt Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
with
others when they choose to move to a new place.
On one hand, it can be difficult to Change preposition
to
approved
something Change the form of the verb
approve
that is
not in common. Unfortunately, when people
decided to move to another country, they need to respect the underlying culture
which has been occur
since Change the verb form
occurring
occurred
long
time ago. It is needed because Correct article usage
a long
people
need to adapt with
their Change preposition
to
neighborhood
in order to have a harmonious life. Change the spelling
neighbourhood
For example
, in Japan, take
a bow when meeting Wrong verb form
taking
people
is become a habit to show honor
. Change the spelling
honour
Thus
, we should learn to do the same thing.
On the other hand
, some culture
may not suitable Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
with
our Change preposition
for
believes
. If Replace the word
beliefs
this
kind of problem happens, it is understandable when people
cannot follow the same thing as what the culture
lies. Nevertheless
, people
should still show respect to
Change preposition
for
the
differences. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, when Change the capitalization
Muslim
muslim
move to Correct your spelling
Muslims
western
Add an article
a western
area
like Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Netherlands
, especially Amsterdam city. Amsterdam city has a nickname called "Correct article usage
the Netherlands
City
of Sin" because they allowed citizens to do illegal things Correct article usage
The City
such
as drugs. Therefore
, there is no obligation for Change the capitalization
Muslim
Muslims
muslim
to do that and so are they have to learn to live Correct your spelling
Muslims
how
to deal with Correct word choice
and how
this
culture
.
In conclusion, it is fine to not make the
Correct article usage
apply
culture
as
a behaviour. Change preposition
apply
Nonetheless
, people
have to accept, respect,
and adapt Remove the comma
apply
with
it according to Change preposition
to
humanity
reasons.Change noun form
humanity's
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