More and more animals are on the verge of extinction and othera are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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are on the verge of
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and some beast on put at risk. Its reason is that natural habitats of
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, hunting and gathering as the main causes. And
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the cause of the
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of wild
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is
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. There are several reasons. I will discuss the causes and solutions of the essay in the paragraph.
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of wild pets are overhunting and
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. Due to
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, wild creatures lose their natural habitat and put their lives at risk. Many people in rural areas hunt
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for their food. They are
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killed for their food. They are
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killed for the production of luxury goods like bags, shoes and coats. The government should launch a nationwide
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to know people about the importance of conserving wildlife. The media can
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contribute their bit. They should discourage people from buying products made of animal skin.
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, some actions can be taken by the government to combat
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problem.
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, with the increase in population, there is a high demand for land and wood. The forest lands are cleared to make it suitable for various activities like agriculture, timber extraction, construction etc.
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would lead to the destruction of the natural habitat of many creatures. Poaching is another activity which puts the lives of many wild carnivores in danger. A number of
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are killed illegally for various purposes.
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illegal wildlife trade
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threatens the existence of many species putting them at
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risk of
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. In conclusion, human activities
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and hunting are the major reasons for the
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of wildlife. By the government's strict law that stops or at least reduces
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and poaching, wild
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can be saved from the brink of
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