The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.

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’s role in society has indeed improved significantly

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these past five decades, turning from the expert

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household management to occupying

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key positions in professional

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gender equality has not been attained and still needs attention. Despite the leading

roles

,

women

still have to face the social pressure to prioritize family over

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career while men

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experience that. Inside the working environment, the chance of

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being heard is less than

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men’s. Even though the pressure is not direct, it is

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clear to acknowledge

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fact people expect

women

to be fully in charge

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family matters. Going for the

first

stage of a career, the interview, especially in

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male-dominated industry, female candidates are often questioned if they will be fully committed to the job when they are getting married and having kids. In the phase after, inequality still

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with the huge difference between maternal and paternal leave shows us

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society

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so much to carry the responsibility of the birth and the newborn without

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support from the spouse. Even after the tiring working hours, big numbers of

women

are occupied with domestic chores since the social judges put the chores as the

women

’s job only. The different treatments do not stop at the higher position giving the female leaders the obstacles that their male coworkers do not notice exist.

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in leadership

roles

struggle more to not

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perceived as bossy and sassy in the same situation where the male bosses are seen as decisive, assertive, firm, and other good accusations. Other than that, during a meeting at work, the chance of

women

’s opinions

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heard by the

audiences

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is less than the men’s with people assuming

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women

’s words are feared to be

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subjective

subjectives

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.

Last

but not least, sexual harassment is the one thing that has not changed from time to time in a work environment and it happens much more often to

women

than to men. The position for

women

in

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role might have changed for the better as we see key

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occupied by

women

, female leaders

also

become more familiar these days than years before, but the inequality that

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women

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to face

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is still happening and should not be ignored by society. One thing might

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been achieved for the greater good but there is still one task for people to overcome,

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gender equality for

women

.