Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In order to earn a good

job

, some

people

think getting a

university

degree is a necessity while others think it is better to own

experience

and soft

skills

.

However

, both sides provide benefits on their own

for instance

completing

university

can give the

students

the

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specialized major related to the

job

and

experience

and soft

skills

can prepare

for

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them for

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the working dynamics that

people

can not get from

university

. At some point, to have a

well

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profession,

people

should prepare themselves with knowledge related to the

job

which usually is taught through

university’s

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specialized majors. For some

study

programs, especially technical ones, there are practical studies providing

students

the

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evidence of the basic

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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they learn in classes. Not only

students

will be equipped with theories and practical classes

,

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but,

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they will

also

be required to undergo an internship program to support

the

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education and

also

to apply their

study

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studies

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into

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real-life

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real life

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cases. On the other side,

experience

and soft

skills

are two important things to have before entering

work

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a work

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environment since to do good in a

job

we do not only apply what we

study

in school

,

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apply

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but

also

the skill to manage challenges in a

dynamical

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circumstance. Most

people

think the way to earn the aforementioned

compentences

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competences

competencies

, the candidates should

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be prepared

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prepared

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prepare

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themselves through

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the working

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working

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experience

before earning

the

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a

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good

job

. Though each side presents benefits which are necessary

on

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apply

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account of getting a good

job

, in my opinion completing

university

will provide not only basic theories and practical

study

but

also

the space for

students

to improve their

experience

and soft

skills

through organizations and internship programs.

Therefore

,

university

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the university

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would be a better choice to earn the capability before earning the

job

we dream of.