It sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. do you agree?

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It is, of course, important for people to earn a sufficiently high
salary
to support their lifestyle.
This
does not mean,
however
, that the
salary
is the only point to be taken into consideration when choosing a
job
. Indeed, I would argue that there are a number of other factors that are equally significant. The
first
point to consider is why it may be a mistake to place too much emphasis on the
salary
. One reason why
this
is so is that you may select a
job
that is
well-paid but ultimately unsatisfying. In
this
case, you may spend 8 hours a day being unhappy. Something else to be taken into account is that highly-paid jobs tend to be stressful and involve long working hours.
For instance
, many doctors have a
60 hour
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working week and they often suffer from
burn-out
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early in their careers and wish they had chosen a less stressful profession. The other point to be taken into account is how other factors may matter more than the
salary
when deciding on a
job
. Indeed, most people would accept that the work environment is key to
job
satisfaction. If you are working alongside people you like and the atmosphere in the office is positive, you are much more likely to be satisfied
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your work.
Likewise
, it is
also
critical that you actually enjoy what you do.
For example
, someone who is artistic is much more likely to be happy working for a low
salary
teaching art than earning a fortune as a merchant banker. In conclusion, I would say that the
salary
should be only one consideration in choosing a
job
and that other factors
such
as
job
satisfaction and work environment are just as important.
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