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Some people believe that money is one of the most important fators in a person's happiness. To what extant do you agree with this?

#people #money #fators #person #happiness
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of the ability of British
students
 about speaking other
languages
besides
 their native one in two years
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2000 and 2010. Overall, from 2000 to 2010, the number of
students
 who could not speak other
languages
 dropped in half while the number of bilingual
students
 increased. Yet Spanish is the most popular language among British
students
.
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Third
 of
students
 in 2000 were able to speak Spanish and
this
 trend slightly increased in 2010 as the
second
 common language after English.
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, in 2000, 20
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 of
students
 could not speak other
languages
 while the number of them in 2010 declined to half. The proportion of
students
 who spoke other
languages
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 from the percentage of15 to 20. While French in 2000 was popular among
students
 by 15
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, it decreased to only 10
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 in 2010.
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