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Nowadays many women are working a full-time jobs like men. What do you think about this phenomenon?

#women #jobs #men #phenomenon
In today's world,
women
work
 under the same conditions and have
a full-time jobs
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a full-time job
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 as men. I believe that
women
 should
work
 and have the same responsibilities as men. And, of course, to be
highly paid
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 professionals and grow in
the
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their
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 career. On the one hand,
women
 have the right to
work
 all day. They should not stay at home with their children and only take care of them. They should develop and communicate in a team.
On the other hand
, there are jobs in which both
women
 and men can
work
.
Women
 can earn the same high wages. They can develop and hold high positions.
In addition
, house duties and child-rearing can be shared between a man and a woman. In conclusion, I believe in
strong
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 possibilities and energy of
women
 to
work
a full-time jobs
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a full-time job
full-time jobs
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 and to have
a
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apply
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good
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well
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 paid ones.
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