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In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology(IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Nowadays, machine vision applications play a vital role in the world we have built. Smart cities, the Internet of Things(IoT), intelligent transportation, and autonomous driving are pioneering
technologies
 using computer vision to thrive. Rising of these enabling
technologies
 will shine the progress of urbanization and lead to intelligent and efficient environments. From
the
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 technical perspective, these
technologies
 need tremendous investment in communication infrastructures and computational devices.
This
 includes extremely-complex processing devices, ample bandwidth capacity, and massive data
centers
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. These breakthroughs come with massive destructive environmental issues like high energy consumption and large carbon footprints. Possible components of a system that implements these
technologies
 are edge
nodes
 for computation and data recording, storage, remote processing
nodes
, and communication links. The computation
nodes
 leverage machine vision and image/video processing applications to achieve these brilliant benefits, but with two main disadvantages.
First
, video data take most of the storage capacity in
nodes
 and bandwidth of communication links.
Second
, most computing
nodes
' processing power is devoted to these applications. Studies show that most energy consumption and carbon footprint relate to video compression, transmission, and processing
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