Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.
When it comes to children's
behaviours
, a group of people believe rewards are perfect to give when children make good deeds Use synonyms
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on the other hand
, others think that punishment can be given to Linking Words
kids
who conduct bad Use synonyms
behaviours
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essay, I will discuss how gifts are a good option as an encouragement for keeping the noble personality whilst getting them punished for wrongdoing is not always the right option for Linking Words
parents
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To begin
with, pupils are easily happy and satisfied with presents, Linking Words
hence
to hand them rewards for acting positively can be beneficial. Linking Words
Firstly
, they oftentimes have no idea if their behaviour is positive or negative, so gifts can signal them that they Linking Words
do
the right thing, Wrong verb form
are doing
thus
encouraging them to do more of it in the future. Linking Words
However
, presents should be kept simple in order to avoid turning their orientation to the other direction when behaving well. Linking Words
For instance
, they can be rewarded with chocolate or ice cream Linking Words
instead
of expensive electronic devices when they help their Linking Words
parents
with domestic chores.
On the other side, when their Use synonyms
behaviours
are going south, punishment is not suitable to warn and give them lessons because sometimes Use synonyms
parents
are not aware that they punish their children so hard to the extent it becomes traumatic and has the potential to damage the little's mental health. Use synonyms
Instead
of learning from their past mistakes, they can turn to be rebellious outside the house and lash out at their friends at school or in other circumstances Linking Words
such
as hitting other Linking Words
kids
since they are always punished when doing so at home. As an alternative, Use synonyms
parents
can communicate their way through words so the little ones can fully understand the things they can or can not do.
In conclusion, despite the importance of making Use synonyms
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aware of their Use synonyms
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, the action should be made subtle so that it will not change the Use synonyms
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' intention when behaving positively and jeopardize their mental well-being which can trigger worse gestures Use synonyms
instead
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