Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behaviour. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

When it comes to children's

behaviours

, a group of people believe rewards are perfect to give when children make good deeds

while

on the other hand

, others think that punishment can be given to

kids

who conduct bad

behaviours

. In

this

essay, I will discuss how gifts are a good option as an encouragement for keeping the noble personality whilst getting them punished for wrongdoing is not always the right option for

parents

.

To begin

with, pupils are easily happy and satisfied with presents,

hence

to hand them rewards for acting positively can be beneficial.

Firstly

, they oftentimes have no idea if their behaviour is positive or negative, so gifts can signal them that they

do

Wrong verb form

are doing

show examples

the right thing,

thus

encouraging them to do more of it in the future.

However

, presents should be kept simple in order to avoid turning their orientation to the other direction when behaving well.

For instance

, they can be rewarded with chocolate or ice cream

instead

of expensive electronic devices when they help their

parents

with domestic chores. On the other side, when their

behaviours

are going south, punishment is not suitable to warn and give them lessons because sometimes

parents

are not aware that they punish their children so hard to the extent it becomes traumatic and has the potential to damage the little's mental health.

Instead

of learning from their past mistakes, they can turn to be rebellious outside the house and lash out at their friends at school or in other circumstances

such

as hitting other

kids

since they are always punished when doing so at home. As an alternative,

parents

can communicate their way through words so the little ones can fully understand the things they can or can not do. In conclusion, despite the importance of making

kids

aware of their

behaviours

, the action should be made subtle so that it will not change the

kids

' intention when behaving positively and jeopardize their mental well-being which can trigger worse gestures

instead

.