Using a computer every day can have more negative that positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

While

some people think using an electronic device ,especially every day is not bad for humans and even is very useful for them, other public,

as well as

many experts, believe that utilising a lot of time has a more negative effect on people. Let me discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, I should say that since the citizenry has different views and opinions towards each other, there has always been disagreement on

this

matter.

For instance

, some citizens think that using a computer is essential for them and they are addicted to electronic worlds.

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, they prefer to do their job and shopping or each work with a computer because they believe

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aid us to have an easier life.

On the other hand

, if I want to talk about the mindset and beliefs of the second category, I have to say that they think utilizing a long date and every day is completely bad for the family.

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, after some time we will get lazy and do less physical activity and

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it is really perilous for everyone.

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, sometimes we do have not good internet and it is

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problem.

However

, they know that electronic device is an integral part of life. In conclusion, if I want to express my opinion I should say since I have already researched and read about

this

issue , I have to say that

it is clear that

the best solution for

this

topic is for the government and people to trust the experts that I completely agree with

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of using a computer every day can have a more negative effect for users.