Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Some populations think that
people
should accept the terrible
situations
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but other communities claim that humans should attempt to enhance their
life
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to
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opportunity
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. In the following paragraphs,
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attitude
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of
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this
concept will be discussed. Accepting hard
situations
is a decision which may be the choice for someone.
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people
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human wants to change every awful situation, they will not be happy
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because
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because
there are a lot of parameters which affect
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these
situations
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family, friends, the
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,
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people
do not acquire plenty
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which they attempt for
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a lot
, and
this
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people
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depressed
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depressed
and hopeless. Other communities think that
people
are able to change the
situations
, or, at least, they should try to improve these awful
situations
.
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, some populations claim that
people
should consider hard
situations
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advantage to
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develop
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develop
their skills to get a better job or enhance their money
situations
and incoming, so, these communities say that if a
problem
comes up,
people
should deal with the
problem
and convert that to a better situation with trying. In conclusion, nowadays, there
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a lot of
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life
and it is important that
people
try to improve the terrible
situations
but it should be considered that to enhance the
situations
must not affect
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normal
life
and it should not causes
people
to get stress and
also
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decisions
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  • endure
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  • settle
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  • tenacious
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  • resourceful
  • optimistic
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  • initiative
  • transform
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