Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effects on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a fact that in recent days, movies and

computer

games

containing

violence

are common in

society

. While some people argue that it has negative impacts on individuals and

society

and should be banned, others believe that these activities are just useful relaxation. From my perspective, I

agree

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these views and would discuss both views in

this

essay. On the one hand, the main reason for

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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in

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films and

computer

games

on

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society

is that

children

tend to learn easily violent actions and do

same

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the same

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things from these

games

or movies.

For example

, these

games

containing

violence

, especially counterstrike, create

the

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dramatical

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violence

and interest for

children

that

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they

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want to try their

action

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actions

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in real life. The

second

reason for

that is

gaming addiction is more popular

for

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children

.

As a result

,

children

are lazy to do outside activities and they would have

obesse

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obsessed

.

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, the

reasons

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for

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the advantages

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advantages

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in

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films and

computer

games

on

society

is that

children

may recharge their energy after playing these

games

.

Furthermore

, these violent

games

and movies , especially

games

may help make new friends for them because of online

connecting

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and

increase

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flexibility in

brain

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the brain

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for

children

. In conclusion,

although

films and

computer

games

containing

violence

have negative effects on

society

but

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also

, these may help

children

in some roles of useful relaxation and I agree