a lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism industry.

A large number of incredible spots in the world

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tourism as a main earning. There are many upsides and downsides. My essay will describe the advantages and disadvantages of the tourism industry,

moreover

, I will give some proof.

Firstly

, the advantage of using these places for travel is countries will develop and improve other great places.

In addition

, the government will manage to save nature clearly and well-groomed.

Secondly

, by increasing the number of tourists visiting cities, they are more likely to spend money to improve local restaurants, hotels and parks.

For instance

, millions of people come to Dubai every year to see

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skyscraper, ocean and desert.

Hence

, the government uses tourist cities to expand and evolve the country.

However

, the downsides cannot be ignored. The main problem is crowded cities. A number of tourists do not read the recommendations and rules of the country and it may be a large problem.

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, in October in

Seoul

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150 people pass away because of a crowded street.

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, some visitors were treated disrespectfully

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local people. Sometimes it may have consequences for visitors, they may even be deported. In conclusion, tourism has many benefits,

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however

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we cannot ignore

downsides

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. Earning money from the attraction of visitors can be problematic. While

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I believe that

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disadvantages can

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