The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010

The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of energy generated from five different sources of
fuel
(oil, coal, natural
gas
, hydropower and nuclear
power
) in France in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, natural
gas
and coal accounted for the highest amount of
fuel
used in the production of
power
in 1990,
whereas
nuclear energy usage increased considerably in two decades after. In 1990, natural
gas
and coal were the main sources of
fuel
for electricity generation and recorded the same percentage,
that is
, just under a third. On the same note, a small proportion of hydropower was used to produce electricity.
Furthermore
, approximately 22% of the oil was the second option for the production of
power
. In the same year, only 17% of nuclear
power
contributed to the total generation of electricity in France.
However
, there was a dramatic change in the source of
fuel
for
power
production 20 years after. The ultimate source was nuclear
power
which increased drastically by half in the 1990 figure. An insignificant percentage of hydropower was used, and
also
natural
gas
and coal which used to be the main source of
fuel
in 1990 decreased moderately from 28% in both to a fifth lower and a small minority in natural
gas
and coal respectively.
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