You bought a laptop while you were travelling abroad. When you reached your native country you realised that some items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the representative of the company. In your letter, give details of the laptop and from where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Apple ,

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I am writing you

this

letter regarding the laptop I bought from Jeddah , Saudi

arabia

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when I was visiting my brother

last

week, from one of the famous electronic shops called Extra.

However

didnt

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didn't

open the laptop until I reached Egypt after my vacation was over .

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Unfortunately

Unfortunetly

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, I was

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shocked

schocked

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when I didn't find

the

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either the main

chargering

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charging

cable or even the plug .

Although

I read the manual online before purchasing the laptop and it mentioned that both accessories are included. I really need the charger cable and the plug since I will not be able

use

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the computer , rather than it's very expensive here in my country due to high taxes . Please I need a

compansasion

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compensation

about

this

issue as soon as possible and how you will deliver the missing items in my product. I recommend you contact my brother in Jeddah to come and pick it up.

Finally

am waiting for an instant response and confirmation to send you my

sibling

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contacting

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details . Thanks in Advance ,,,

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

178 words

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