In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?
In some nations,
children
start academic Use synonyms
education
at four years old, while some people believe that Use synonyms
children
should attend school at Use synonyms
seven
or eight years old. I agree with the Use synonyms
second
idea.
Starting formal Linking Words
education
from an early Use synonyms
age
is not beneficial to Use synonyms
children
for some reasons. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
children
aged four do not have enough cognitive development in order to be taught academic subjects. At Use synonyms
this
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age
,Use synonyms
this
is important to play and be educated in some basics in a fun method in order to improve their abilities like creativity and thinking. I believe that, in kindergarten, Linking Words
children
can be taught a foreign language effectively, as learning a Use synonyms
second
language from a young Linking Words
age
is easier, and other academic subjects are unnecessary pressure for them.
Beginning academic Use synonyms
education
at Use synonyms
seven
or eight Use synonyms
age
can be more useful. Use synonyms
In other words
, Linking Words
children
are mature enough to start formal Use synonyms
education
. It is easier to spend six or Use synonyms
seven
hours learning new different academic subjects. Use synonyms
In addition
, they are more interested in learning new things rather than only playing, unlike young Linking Words
children
who are more willing to play and experience new things.
To sum up, It seems to me that formal Use synonyms
education
should start at Use synonyms
seven
or eight since Use synonyms
children
are more prepared to be taught various academic Use synonyms
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for a longer time.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite