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You recently took a trip with a taxi company. The driver behaved in an unacceptable way and you had a lot of problems. You complained to the company but no-one has replied to your complaint. Write a letter to the taxi company. In your letter • say why you are writing and how you feel • explain what happened • tell them what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Shikha, and I have recently hired a cab from your company. I am writing
this
 letter to complain
you
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 about the driver I received on that day. His name was Tarun, and he was a non-English speaker. He was so arrogant while talking which I found as misbehaviour from his side. Actually, I had a business meeting
last
 Friday in Chandigarh, so I hired a cab from Ludhiana to Chandigarh city. Unfortunately, it was my biggest mistake to hire a taxi as I felt so uncomfortable during my whole journey
such
 as I asked him how much time it will take, and he answered in his language that he do not know. There are many other things which he did and due to that, I felt so guilty for hiring Uber. I hired it for my convenience but it went wrong. I have some requests,
Firstly
, you should check the background of the person before hiring them.
Also
, give them the training for at least 1 month before assigning them work, so that they know how to deal with different types of people. I hope you'll take appropriate action on my suggestions. Yours Sincerely, Shikha
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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