Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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soaring development of technology,

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already penetrated

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our daily lives. Some people believe

students

don't have to go to

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and they can just receive education from

internet

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at home. In my opinion,

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disagree with

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opinion,

schools

are irreplaceable. On the one hand,

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admittedly

, in

this

information era,

internet

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the internet

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bring

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multifarious benefits

toward

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students

on

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studying. There are many

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websites

websits

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websites

and applications

provide

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free and adequate educational resources.

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, there is

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online platform called Khan Academy

offers

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that offers

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many free

excerices

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exercises

experiences

and mock tests for users with a wide range of subjects, and

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often

offen

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use it to prepare

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math exams.

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,

students

could use

internet

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to study at home and acquire knowledge at their own pace compared to class education at

school

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teachers need to fit every

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study progress. Studying at home let

students

are able to gain deeper insights and

multi-dimension

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understanding of the subjects and topics

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they

that

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they

are interested in

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since so great a

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variety

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variety

of related information can be accessed

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through

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some

power

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search engines,

such

as Google and Baidu.

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,

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believe cyber-education cannot play all the

role

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of

schools

.

First

of all,

school

is not a simple institution that only

impart

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knowledge to

students

, it is

also

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essential stage to teach them moral values. And especially for pupils, who have not set a clear system of morality and it is the

school

and teachers'

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to educate them about values and altitude, rights and wrongs, goods and evils to help them develop into a well-rounded and capable

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.

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,

students

at

school

are

being

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surrounded by teachers and peers which is

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important

imporant

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important

to

develop

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their social skills and

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a

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outgoing, cooperative and tolerant

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.

For instance

,

students

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often

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asked to collaborate with their classmates to do group tasks to develop

them

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teamwork ability which is really helpful for their future career ladders. In conclusion, even though

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does benefit a lot toward

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academic

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performance

perfomance

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,

but

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schools

are

also

necessary to help

students

reach their fullest potential.