With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends.
These days, not only every
technologies
but Change to a singular noun
technology
also
online communication is increasing day by day. So, our life is being easily
and we have many opportunities through Change the word
easy
online
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an online
connection
, as well, it has its benefits and drawbacks. In this
essay, it will be considered about its with examples.
On the one hand, one of the benefits of online connection
is that it brings close people closer to people far away. For example
, my brother is studying in Russia and my family members and I talk with his
almost every day through online communication, as well, Correct pronoun usage
him
it
helps to save money and Correct pronoun usage
which
time
. Moreover
, it can make close friends
through it. For instance
, these days, I am using the SPEAK PAL program and I have the best chance through this
program for
make Change preposition
to
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foreign
forigen
, close Correct your spelling
foreign
friends
and speak in English with these friends
. Therefore
, online social connection
is prevented alone leisure time
.
On the other hand
, one of the drawbacks of online relation
is that it is Fix the agreement mistake
relations
get
away from real life because some populations use it so much, Wrong verb form
getting
as a result
, of which they do not have enough time
for their family. For example
, I can use it too much, however
, I do not have enough time
for other homework and family. Besides
, friends
we met through online relation
can not do anything for us except talk. Fix the agreement mistake
relations
For example
, we can not spend free
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our free
time
with us
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ourselves
for
relax and can not meet when we want. Change preposition
to
However
, we can enjoying
in extra Change the verb form
enjoy
be enjoying
time
with real friends
.
In conclusion, today the Internet is necessary for connection
and humans can use it effectively. I think,
it will have a good effect on their lives.Remove the comma
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