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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a difference.

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How to protect
environment
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 from continuing the tendency of deterioration has sparked bitter controversy among the public. Some
people
 deny the power of individual actions and say they exert minimal impacts on reducing environmental pollution and only governments and companies can reverse the trend. Despite the fact that the effectiveness of
governmental
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 and
enterprises’
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 measures, personal efforts should
also
 be involved during
this
 process. Authorities should take over the stage and unveil a series of far-reaching approaches to mitigate environmental pollution. The
first
 useful method would be giving fines to
people
 who litter in natural surroundings or scribble
on
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 public facilities.Authorities could
also
 invest money
on
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 developing renewable energies
such
 as solar and wind power to replace fossil fuels that emit
large
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amount
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amounts
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 of greenhouse gases into the air.In the global landscape, governments can seek
cooperations
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 with international organizations to better preserve
the
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nature, and practices
such
 as
Paris
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the Paris
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agreements
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 would be a positive step in tackling climate change. Businesses should assist the government and play their own role in the course of environmental protection. One method
that
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worth
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 advocating is enterprises inventing eco-friendly products
such
 as hybrid cars or even pure electric vehicles, which are readily available all over the globe, to replace conventional cars that run on gasoline.Companies should
also
 make
endeavors
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 to upgrade their manufacturing machines to make their equipment give off less waste. Meanwhile, they need to constantly elevate the standard of production and better manage
the
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sewage or other wastes to reduce environmental degradation.
However
, individual efforts cannot be ignored given
the
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 large number of populations globally.
People
 could adopt greener lifestyles
such
 as commuting by public transportation to reduce
the
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 reliance on private cars.
Also
, bike sharing schemes are
also
 prevalent and popular options among the public that help environmental protection.
Besides
,
people
 could replace plastic bags with eco-friendly products
such
 as cloth ones,
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 stainless steel chopsticks
instead
 of disposable cutlery to relieve white pollution and tree clearance. In conclusion,
although
 personal efforts are trivial compared with what macro-policies can achieve, we could join hands to slow down
even
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or even
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 reverse environmental degradation considering the large population in the world.
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