The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate

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of a small town

center

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which is called Islip. The upper layout is the current figure of the town and the other map is the future plans for its enrichment.

Overall

, it can be seen that the most significant

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the town is the

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road

around the

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. Various other

developements

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developments

including housing and

shops

are planned for the future. with regards to the current layout of Islip, it is demonstrated that

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shops

are on either side of

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road

However

, it appears

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that

the upper one will be demolished to make new housing,

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park,

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a shopping

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center

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and

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station. The main

road

in the first map, run from the east to the west. It is replaced by pedestrians

road

in the second layout. The park's location will not change, but it seems that the park will be reduced in size. The school location will be the same, but it will be re-designed. The

second row

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shops

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will be located in the

center

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of the future figure and new housing will be added

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the old one under the

shops

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Vocabulary: Replace the words center, road, shops with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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6 paragraphs

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