The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate
progress
of a small town Add an article
the progress
center
which is called Islip. The upper layout is the current figure of the town and the other map is the future plans for its enrichment.
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centre
Overall
, it can be seen that the most significant chang
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change
of
the town is the Change preposition
in
circle
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circled
road
around the center
. Various other Change the spelling
centre
developements
including housing and Correct your spelling
developments
shops
are planned for the future.
with regards to the current layout of Islip, it is demonstrated that 2 row
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2-row
shops
are on either side of main
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the main
road
. However
, it appears thet
the upper one will be demolished to make new housing, Correct your spelling
that
car
park, Correct article usage
a car
shopping
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a shopping
center
and Change the spelling
centre
bus
station. The main Correct article usage
a bus
road
in the first map, run from the east to the west. It is replaced by pedestrians road
in the
second layout. The park's location will not change, but it seems that the park will be reduced in size.
The school location will be the same, but it will be re-designed.
The second row
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second-row
shops
will be located in the Change preposition
of shops
center
of the future figure and new housing will be added Change the spelling
centre
along side
the old one under the Correct your spelling
alongside
shops
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