In many countries, paying for things using mobile app is becoming increasingly common. Does this development are having more advantages or disadvantages?

In recent times, paying

payments

with mobile phones

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become very widespread. Payment for purchased items has been developed all over the world, whether

developed

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or developing countries, in

this

essay, I will talk about all the benefits of using digital payment, as well as its disadvantages.

To begin

with, millions of people all around the world use digital

payments

for myriads of matters, like school

fee

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, electricity bills or shopping stuff. And

this

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them to save time and money,

for example

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,

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people can buy whatever they want only with their phone and in a few minutes

instead

of standing in

a

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long traffic or driving a long way,

also

they can save

their

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time for meaningful progress,

Furthermore

, people can buy everything from another country and they just received it at home,

for instance

, you can sit at you home in America and buy something that you want from Australia and

then

have it a few days later .

Nevertheless

, there is a security

risks

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while doing network

payments

, recently in some

country

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there

is

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some thieves who can

hacked

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bank accounts and have access to your money and you can easily

lost

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lose

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your funds ,

moreover

, there is some issues with delivery Due to the lack of updates of postal companies and long routes,

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, one of my friends order something from Germany and after 2 months it has not been delivered yet. In conclusion, I firmly believe that

although

this

technological development has increased fraud the benefits of online

payments

,

such

as time-saving and the growth of an economy, are way more than

drawbacks

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the drawbacks

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.