The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the progress of a small town centre which is called Islip. The upper layout is the current figure of the town and the other map is the future plans for its enrichment.

Overall

, it can be seen that the most significant change

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the town is the circled

road

around the centre. Various other developments including housing and

shops

are planned for the future. with regards to the current layout of Islip, it is demonstrated that 2-row

shops

are on either side of

main

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road

However

, it appears

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that

the upper one will be demolished to make new housing,a car park, a shopping

center

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and a bus station. The main

road

in the first map, run from the east to the west. It is replaced by pedestrians

road

in the second layout. The park's location will not change, but it seems that the park will be reduced in size. The school location will be the same as well, but it will be re-designed. The

second row

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shops

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of shops

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will be located in the centre of the future figure and new housing will be added alongside the old one under the

shops

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, shops with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

194 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
town center

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?