School should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of
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international
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an international
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language
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among children in academic
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institutions
intitutions
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institutions
was always debatable
now
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has become more controversial. Some masses believe that educational
center
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should not compel students to learn speech in order to compete with
other competitor
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. I strongly agree with the prompt statement that a child shall not be compelled to study a different subject.
This
essay supports my view in terms of difficulty and usage and
thus
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to
logical
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conclusion.
To begin
with, there are myriad of reasons which will
further
elaborate
this
argument but the most preponderant
one
stems from the fact that focus on
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tongue should not be the concern because many learners are not willing to speak in
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an overseas
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language
in their native places, To exemplify, communication of bilingual speaker can be only done when they have other people in their place
otherwise
being bilingual will be waste for them. Another pivotal aspect of
this
notion is that every student is not
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brilliant
briliant
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brilliant
in their respective studies
while
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pushing them to learn
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may cause study syndrome to them.
In other words
, they got confused to learn
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thing in
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term of other
language
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and techniques.
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consequences
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, they will start
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to
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and become
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in their areas of
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.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate
these argument
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and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this
trend but the most
alraming
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alarming
one
is that
expertisement
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experiment
in
billigual
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bilingual
language
can help the learner to build
own
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individuality in
the
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society. In the fast pace life, many international universities moved their student to
other international institute
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for
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internship and being a globetrotter, if
one
should expert in multiple
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then
it would be great
oppotunities
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opportunities
for them academically as well as professionally. To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above,
one
can reach
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the conclusion that drawbacks to push the reader to be
expert
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in multiple
language
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are
intrumental
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instrumental
as
one
should focus and participate according to their interest.
Nevertheless
, its potential benefits should not be overlooked either.
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