As computers are being used more and more in education, teachers will soon be unnecessary To what extent do you agree or disagree

Yes, as we are in

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century with

advancement

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the advancement

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of technology.

However

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this

advanced growth has

also

taken place in our education system. But will

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these

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computers

uses

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going to

imapct

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impact

teachers necessity in school? Yes or no, I will put forward my idealogy

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the topic ahead in

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essay. From my perspective, I do not agree completely with the belief that

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technological growth can replace the position of professors in school.

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, there are many subjects which can be explained through the incorporation of

computers

, because

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they

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can store numerous of information on a particular course, but when it comes to

give

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practical explanation apart from theory the role of teachers

are

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important.

Furthermore

,

computers

can not monitor the class and

teaches

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a

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students about manners and

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good character.

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, in my

opinion

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computers

can not provide

a interactive sessions

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in

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class.

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a

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instructor can do it well and clear each and every doubt of

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children

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very

sponteneous

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spontaneous

spontaneously

and help clear the concept.

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knowledge on any research in college. Another major role of faculty is inevitable, their personal attention on each student in the classroom.

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,

there

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plethora of experience is

also

vital

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point

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considered in education. In conclusion, I personally disagree with the statement of computer use of implementation of technology to any better extent can rule out the requirement of

teacher

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teachers

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in

education

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the education

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system. Traditionally or in

modern

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the modern

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era the advantage of

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the teacher

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teacher

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teachers

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will always stand out

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to technology. Yes, they can be more productive if goes hand in hand

altogehter

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altogether

together

.