You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Ajay, I hope

this

letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I am moving to Canada

month for a master's degree course.

Therefore

, I need your support to find a suitable part-time job for me.

To begin

with, I have enrolled master's degree course in environmental science at

Berklin

Correct your spelling

Berlin

University.

This

course is for two years with 04 semesters and the regular timing is the morning half. Considering the syllabus, I believe that daily 2-3 hours are more than enough to complete my assignments and tutorials. In order to manage my daily expenses and repay my education loan, I would have the necessity to do some part-time job while studying. Fortunately, I will not be busy in the evening time.

As a result

, It would be more convenient for me to join any evening job. As you are aware that I am extremely superior in production management and planning.

Hence

, you may circulate my resume within your network or email it to your manufacturers for

further

processing. I would

also

suggest requesting within your company for any alternative position. Thank you for your usual support and co-operation. Yours lovingly, Anand

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

204 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Educational aspirations
Work experience
Financial independence
Resume (or CV)
Local job market
International student
Legal requirements
Student work permit
Employment trends
Time management
Networking
A part-time position
Balance studies and work
Job hunting strategies

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