the pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in the New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant

the pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in the New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts confront how the online
sales
of the retail sector are distributed between 2003 and 2013. The pies are divided into four modalities:
travel
, film or
music
, books, and clothes. In 2003
travel
sales
made the most revenue compared to the other three typologies,
whit
36% of the total
sales
. Clothes
sales
followed
whit
24%. Third came film and
music
, 21%, followed by the lasting books. Ten years later, cinematography and
music
had the lead,
whit
a 33% of the entire
sales
.
Travel
sales
shifted to the second position
whit
29%, still representing a considerable slice of the pie. Book
sales
increased to a positive 22%, whilst clothes
sales
dropped heavily from 24% in 2003 to a small 16% in 2013. In conclusion,
Travel
and Books are the most consistent of all the typologies of
sales
, averaging the lowest differential of
sales
between the ten years.
On the other hand
, film and
music
increased considerably, probably
due to
the exponential technological improvement that helped increase the demand.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, travel, music, whit with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "considerable" was used 2 times.
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