Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over the responsibility of the government for its members.

While

some hold a strong view that health care and

education

should be paid

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the government, the opposite makes a statement that it is not the responsibility of the state.In my viewpoint, It is essential for the governors to support financially at the expense of health care and

education

;

however

, they are not liable fully for

this

cost.

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a shadow of a doubt, healthcare and

education’s

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education

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spending should be covered by the author.

While

not levying tuition fees brings about a great influence on

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the workforces’

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workforces’

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academic level,

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covering medical expense helps dwellers amend their working productivity in order to decrease burdens for

this

nation.

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, Germany - a developing country - provides financial support for healthcare in the form of insurance and

education

through scholarships.

Hence

, it is vital that the governors should raise funds for

two

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aforementioned backbone industries.

While

the necessity of government’s

finance

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support is widely acknowledged, the state should not bear full responsibility for them. The national budget is limited and it must be allocated to various fields to develop a country

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.

For instance

, technology, military and transportation are important industries for a nation's development.

Thus

, all the fees should not be responded to fully by the government. In conclusion, health care and

education

spending should be managed and covered effectively by the governors.