Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.

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well,
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just know that you are
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inviting
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speaker for
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event
which
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as "Ted Talk". it is really
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grateful
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great
to having
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for attending
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event
. Now, my main purpose
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this
letter to you is can you please arrange
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can
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give
speech
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on
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motivational
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topic.
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cover some
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topic
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like motivation in
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the stressful
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life cycle of every working person.
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they should
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include how people can motivate
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in their
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family
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family
and friend circle.
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, other community people
also
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attended
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attend
this
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because
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because
they
also
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same
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things in
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their
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their
daily life routine. It has been observed that if we attend
this
type of
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we will feel very happy in our life.
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,
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is my point of view you take some other
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from people. Thank You,
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