Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city centre with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, due to a myriad of

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starting working in ,offices there was gridlock in peak hours which leads to an increase in wait time and delays in reaching the workplace on time.While some

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argue that replacing entertainment areas near the

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with high-rise

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for the office worker will immensely bring down the commute time, others believe that

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changes will adversely affect the environment.

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essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On one hand, if the

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and

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were replaced with

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it can have a positive impact on society.

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,with the development of ,

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the area will grow economically.The employees of the nearby offices can buy or rent the

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for easy commute and can reduce the traffic congestion in the

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.

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, fewer

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will use their cars to travel to work and may use public transport or may choose to walk.

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will lead to the establishment of shops and other commercial

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around that place and

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there would be chances of employment.

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, because of ,commercialization there are hardly any

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and

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left in the

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,these kinds of places are

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necessity for the kids to play and the older

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to do their morning or evening walks and

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for

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of all ages to socialise.

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,in a recent survey by The Times of India 60% of

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have shown concern about the reduction of

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and

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in the

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and pledged to plant more trees to reduce global warming. In my opinion, It is crucial to

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more

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and

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in the community to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide.

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though building high-rise apartments can help commuters, it will affect the environment adversely. In conclusion ,

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of tearing down the

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and the greeneries around us , it would be more beneficial if the government can build more

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and

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for the use of the general public.