Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city centre with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, due to a myriad of

people

starting working in ,offices there was gridlock in peak hours which leads to an increase in wait time and delays in reaching the workplace on time.While some

people

argue that replacing entertainment areas near the

city

with high-rise

buildings

for the office worker will immensely bring down the commute time, others believe that

such

changes will adversely affect the environment.

This

essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On one hand, if the

parks

and

gardens

were replaced with

buildings

it can have a positive impact on society.

In other words

,with the development of ,

buildings

the area will grow economically.The employees of the nearby offices can buy or rent the

buildings

for easy commute and can reduce the traffic congestion in the

city

.

For example

, fewer

people

will use their cars to travel to work and may use public transport or may choose to walk.

Moreover

,

this

,

development

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will lead to the establishment of shops and other commercial

buildings

around that place and

hence

there would be chances of employment.

On the other hand

, because of ,commercialization there are hardly any

parks

and

gardens

left in the

city

.

Also

,these kinds of places are

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necessity for the kids to play and the older

people

to do their morning or evening walks and

also

for

people

of all ages to socialise.

For example

,in a recent survey by The Times of India 60% of

people

have shown concern about the reduction of

parks

and

gardens

in the

city

and pledged to plant more trees to reduce global warming. In my opinion, It is crucial to

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more

parks

and

gardens

in the community to reduce the emission of carbon dioxide.

Therefore

though building high-rise apartments can help commuters, it will affect the environment adversely. In conclusion ,

instead

of tearing down the

parks

and the greeneries around us , it would be more beneficial if the government can build more

parks

and

gardens

for the use of the general public.