You have booked a hotel for some reasons you need to change the booking dates and details. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel for the same in your letter give details For the booking you have made Inform changes you want with your booking State reasons for the changes.

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Dear Sir or Madam, After greetings! My name is Mohamed Ammar and I have booked through your website, a deluxe room at your hotel Crown Plaza, Sohar branch, on the 30th of November.

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, I have added my wife and two children with me but without breakfast included. You might find more details under my reservation number #3111013.

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, I would like to request some modifications to the reservation ,please.

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is due to some personal reasons related to my wife's health we decided to delay our flight to Sohar.

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, we request the hotel to change our check-in date to the 07th of December for five days.

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, we

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prefer to include the breakfast meal in our booking for the whole period of our stay. We are sorry for any inconvenience

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may cause the hotel, but

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, I oblige myself to pay all the extra financial burdens that result from these changes. Kindly confirm to us the availability of the room on the aforementioned dates to finalize our bookings. Looking forward to your confirmation. Sincerely yours, Mohamed Ammar

moh_znoTue Nov 15 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

booking reference number
initially scheduled
request modification
alteration
availability
confirmation
additional charges
re-schedule
accommodation
amenities
reservation
travel itinerary
personal emergency
extend
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