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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

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Consumption of sugary
beverages
 is rising day by day. There are several reasons why
this
 is happening, but there are still things we can do to get individuals to drink less of these
drinks
. There may be a variety of factors contributing to
people
are
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consumping
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consuming
 many
sugagy
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sugary
drinks
. The number of
people
 drinking sugary
beverages
 is increasing for several reasons. One of them is affordable pricing. In fact, my friend and I frequently bought sugary
beverages
 because it was within our budget, while nutritious
drinks
 were quite expensive for us.
As a result
,
although
 we know sugar-based
drinks
 are not good for our health, we still choose them
instead
 of healthy
beverages
. In terms of
the
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variety, sugary
drinks
 are much more diverse than others, so
the
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consumers can easily find a type that suits their taste.
Consequently
,
people
 prefer to drink sugary
beverages
. We can take a few steps to address
this
 problem. The government should have
a
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 policy to increase taxes on sugary soft
drinks
, When the price of sugary
drinks
 increases,
people
 will turn to healthy
drinks
 with the same price.
This
 will lead to companies producing more types of healthy
drinks
 to meet consumer demand.
As a result
, the types of
drinks
 in stores will be more diverse, which helps customers have more choices to suit their
taste
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. In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for
people
 are having more and more sugar-based
drinks
, and steps
need
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 to be taken to tackle
this
 problem are to raise taxes.
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