Some people think that criminal behaviour can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often believed that the mentality of the audience to commit a scandal is based on genetic factors.

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, others have an opinion that states situations may be the reason for a person to

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an atrocity.I would like to explain both cases and give my opinion in

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essay.

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, I would agree with the latter part since a majority of the audience is forced by the situations and disturbances and

commit

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illegal activity.

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, criminal activities through genes are a possibility in today's era. Mainly public with mental deficiencies used to happen in the past. But ,

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the advancement of social media, many youngsters are attracted towards adult content and are unable to control sexual feelings

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several sexual crimes like rape are happening nowadays in today's era which is

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psychological factors.

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, a recent study has shown that in INDIA, every three days , a girl is been raped and sexually harassed. Adding to it, criminals like murderers have become quite common

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severe poverty across the globe. Many public

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committing crimes for the sake of money to lead their families.

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,pick-pocketing cases have been seen very often nowadays.

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, a news magazine has collected data from the past year and revealed that the number of audiences committing the crime has rocketed from five per cent in 2021 to around 55 per cent in 2022

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a lack of money to lead life.

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, I would like

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that

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having criminal activities

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genetic issues, it is an alarming situation seeing the stats of crowd convicting misconduct

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situations and

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it is the role of the government to make sure crowd have a sufficient amount of money to lead a stable life.

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task response

Ensure that your essay clearly addresses all aspects of the prompt, providing a balanced discussion of both views. Additionally, provide a clear opinion at the end of the essay.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the logical structure of the essay by using clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensuring that ideas flow coherently from one to the next.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

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