University should accept equal no. Of male and female in every subject.do you agree or disagree.

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In my opinion,

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same

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opportunities.

However

, I do not agree with

this

idea of accepting equal proportions of each

gender

in every subject.

To begin

with, having the same number of

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and

women

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all degree

courses

is simply

unrealastic

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unrealistic

Students

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numbers in any

courses

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depends

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their

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applications that the institutions

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. If a university decided to fill

courses

with equal no. Of males and females. It would need enough applicants of each

gender

.There are many

courses

more popular

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gender

and the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions.

For instance

- nursing

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tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to feel more

courses

if fifty

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of the places needed to go to males.

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, the practical concerns expressed above, I

also

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believe

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that It would be unfair to base admission to

universities

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courses

gender

. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In

this

way,

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man

and

women

have

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opportunities. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course . for epitome- there are many places

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man

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and

women

discrimination

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. But the government starts many

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campaigns

compaigns

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campaigns

for males and females. In conclusion, the selection of

universities

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students should be based on merits, it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on

gender

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