University should accept equal no. Of male and female in every subject.do you agree or disagree.

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In my opinion,

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opportunities.

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, I do not agree with

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idea of accepting equal proportions of each

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in every subject.

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with, having the same number of

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all degree

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is simply

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numbers in any

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courses

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applications that the institutions

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. If a university decided to fill

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with equal no. Of males and females. It would need enough applicants of each

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.There are many

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more popular

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gender

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and the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions.

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tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to feel more

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if fifty

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of the places needed to go to males.

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, the practical concerns expressed above, I

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that It would be unfair to base admission to

universities

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courses

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gender

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. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In

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way,

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opportunities. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course . for epitome- there are many places

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man

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discrimination

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. But the government starts many

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campaigns

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campaigns

for males and females. In conclusion, the selection of

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students should be based on merits, it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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241 words

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University should accept equal no. Of male and female in every subject.do you agree or disagree.

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