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In some countries, celebrities can now earn more than senior politicians. what might be the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In some countries, celebrities are paid more than senior politicians. Acting and Ruling are two different things.
One
 is for entertaining
people
 and the other
one
 is for helping
people
 in a political way. There is no discrimination in
one
's
work
. Other countries help each other to grow them in a different field whether it is acting, political issues etc. It's not
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necessary
nesscary
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necessary
 that celebrities get paid more than a political party. They both
work
 equally for themselves and for
people
. It gives a negative impact on a
person
 and other countries. The need to equally treat each other in a democratic world. Some
people
 may raise the issue of earning less than what other
people
 earn. It should be partially equal for a
person
. There can be possibilities
of
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 an
actor
to earn
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 more because of his/her role in a different sector or more
efforts
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 has been put to make a successful movie or web series. Politicians
has
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 to manage all the demand of the
people
 to keep them happy in their respective
work
. The pay given to a politician is by the government
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whereas
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where as
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 the pay given to an
actor
 is by the production and
people
, the
work
 and efforts enhance another
person
 or an audience sum amount of a profit is given to an
actor
.
This
 may raise a positive and negative development to other
people
 thinking
actor
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 can earn more and if they become an
actor
 they will get a maximum amount of money. To change
this
 mentality there should be proper management who will help another
person
 to clear out the misunderstanding which they are facing its not necessary to earn less or settle for less. There should a proper
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protocol
protocal
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protocol
 to run a country. In
India
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 the government gets paid more than an
actor
 who acts day and night to build up their careers. They earn for themselves and make
people
 happy about the
work
which
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apply
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they do. the conclusion of the topic is,
One
 should never think that
other
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person
 is getting
pay
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 more than the other
person
. In the
end
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 all are
one
 and they
work
 and earn for themselves.
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