It is more important for governments to spend public funds on promoting a healthy lifestyle than treatment Do you agree or disagree?

In

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ambitious world, eating junk foods is becoming a trend, some believe that it is essential for governments to promote healthy lifestyles

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than treating people.

Although

both sides have sense, I agree that a commitment to a healthy routine is

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excellent stamina.

Firstly

, spending funds on hospitals is commonly done by countries,

additionally

, nations usually include yearly reserves to be spent on healthcare treatments, they spent billions of dollars to build hospitals and clinics.

For example

, in the USA itself as per the health ministry, the money spent on treatments in 2019 was more than $2 billion.

Accordingly

, the spent on promoting a healthy lifestyle was only a million.

Moreover

, it is always better to prevent sicknesses rather than treat them, unlike what is being done nowadays, taxes shall include only junk foods as it is the main reason for illness,

otherwise

, residents will always tend to spend less on healthy goods as they are considered expensive compared to other food.

Furthermore

, people

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with the concept that an unhealthy lifestyle is ultimately causing diseases,

for instance

, eating excessive amounts of junk foods, sugar and sweets will eventually cause defects

such

as heart attacks and cancer.

As a result

, authorities should decrease the taxes on healthy food,

in addition

, they should enhance agriculture in the country rather than importing food from other countries.

In particular

, they should fund farms to be able to manage and increase their sales to overcome exporting goods.

To conclude

, nations should take care more in funding the right authorities and preventing people from contamination rather than waiting for them to

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sick and

then

paying more money to treat them.

However

, spending more money on the other side would make huge progress in human life.