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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

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A commonly held belief is that affording necessary goods play an important role in our modern life and no one can deny it.
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, in recent years we have noticed that purchasing has become entertainment for
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people, as well as
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a way of fulfilling their needs. Personally, I agree with
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To begin
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recent shopping is
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only due to the shopping malls. It is not a secret
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tat
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 recently many plazas are erected in the cities, which
also
 certain amusements are equipped around where children could play inside.
Consequently
, not only parents can dedicate quality time to their
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, but simultaneously their kids can have a
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 time playing or learning some new things like handicrafts.
As a result
,
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affirmative.
On the other hand
, in our precious era, folks need no special occasion to shop. Luckily, nowadays shopping is not restricted to groceries, but
also
 luxury items, because the main motive is
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. Need is not the only case anymore, but the actual reason is self-satisfaction- they feel happy when they shop for what they like.
For instance
, many individuals shop for branded products, even if the same item could be found in the market at an economical cost, just to satisfy their esteem needs. Since a vast majority of the population these days are engaged in jobs
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 working outdoors, they need new stuff to meet their everyday needs. In a nutshell, shopping is now considered a pastime activity of a task because of the change
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mindset over the years. It started from being
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 household errand to a leisure activity. I strongly believe
this
 a positive trend seeing that a vast majority of the population are following their own desires and boosting the economy with their many purchases.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • retail therapy
  • materialism
  • disposable income
  • economic growth
  • financial instability
  • environmental impact
  • social interaction
  • community building
  • emotional satisfaction
  • advertising influence
  • shopping habits
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