It is argued that expressing any kind of opinion online by people can affect others, and a clear example of that could be a judgement about governments or companies.

It is argued that expressing any kind of opinion online by people can affect others, and a clear example of that could be a judgement about governments or companies.
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essay agrees that the population must have freedom of expression,
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every idea published should be meditated, due to severe qualifications
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hurt anyone. The most important thing that leads to somebody writing their opinion online, is their own feeling about something, no matter if is positive or negative. Owing to
this
expression the critic could be constructive or destructive. When the comment is good, there is no problem,
on the contrary
, everyone
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to have that kind of observation, which can improve any situation,
such
as the working environment, state of policy, or any social condition.
For instance
, if a new president was been elected, and the population agrees with the election results, all kind of comments online extend good opinions and gives the new government good energy, the best wishes, and
as a
result
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enhance
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hope.
In contrast
, is relevant to highlight that negative comments online could affect directly
whom
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receive
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them, and every online opinion is the worst but is public. As the saying goes: good is expressed in public and bad in private. One example had been when
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community
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the comunity
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comunity
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community
write
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negative opinions online about the company where work, the feelings around
this
idea have a damaging trend, and
this
generates an adverse effect getting worst the work way
,
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and the whole environment. In summary, people have to gain awareness about each online publication. Will be better if people write with
a cold heads
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, when they feel upset, and do not generate more tension in wherever place.
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