The diagrams below show the layout of the town’s shopping centre at present and after a future redevelopment.

The diagrams below show the layout of the town’s shopping centre at present and after a future redevelopment.
Given is a diagram comparing 2 levels of a city centre at present and in the future, after a redesign.
Overall
, on both floors,
while
some places will be remained after redevelopment, like
shops
, a number of new facilities will be built, like the lifts and the escalators.
Furthermore
, the number of useful facilities will be increased, the ATMs
for instance
. On the first floor, the fast food in the northwest corner will be replaced with a new food court.
Also
, the
shops
in the northeast corner will be replaced with a new cafe’. The southern
shops
will be extended, but the southwest
shops
will be replaced with a new escalator. The location of Atm in the north of the map will not be changed.
Further
, exactly below the ATM, a new lift will be constructed. On the second floor, the southern
shops
will be altered with a new cinema and the northern
shops
will be divided into two square sectors in the northeast and the northwest corners. The stairs will be demolished and
instead
, a new elevator will be built.
Moreover
, on
this
level,two new facilities will be made up; a northern ATM and a lift below it
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