With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
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the number
people
using social
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the social
network
without parental Fix the agreement mistake
networks
control
is growing. Even though their intentions are harmful, it
can lead to tragic consequences. Correct pronoun usage
they
However
, it can be avoided by control
of internet
use
and forcing teenagers
having
more face-to-face meetings with their friends.
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digital
world results creation of new apps for chatting and finding new acquaintances. Some of them can be not fully secure and young Correct article usage
the digital
people
are often the main targets for swindlers. Due to scientific research, teenagers
are more susceptible to scams, while Add a hyphen
grown-ups
grown ups
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grown-ups
under
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Furthermore
, being more online active deteriorates young people
’s social skills and reduce
physical activity, Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
that
can lead to problems in Correct pronoun usage
which
further
life. Such
as,
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of Correct article usage
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to speak to Add an article
the ability
an ability
people
face-to-face and make friends as well as, sedentary
lifestyle can lead to obesity.
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a sedentary
Therefore
, parental control
over children’s activities online should be supervised. For instance
, banning use
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a more
teenagers
on the internet
space. Another solution could be encouraging youngsters to perform more in real life, face-to-face with their friends. That would shorten use
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the use
internet
.
In conclusion, unsupervised online activities of young people
can be unsafe. It would be a good decision for parents to take one’s usage of social media under control
. As well as pushing teenagers
spend
more time outdoors would have a positive effect Fix the infinitive
to spend
for
them in terms of avoiding Change preposition
on
negative
consequences of Correct article usage
the negative
internet
use
. Furthermore
, it will help youngsters to improve their social skills and health conditions.Submitted by anya.shihytsk on
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