The charts below show the primary hobbies of the adult residents in a small Tunisian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given Pie charts illustrate how different the adults' primary

hobbies

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are in a small town of Tunisian

percentagewise

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percentage-wise

percentages

in the years 1980 and 2020.

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, at the beginning of the

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period

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the proportion of all

hobbies

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was the same. In comparison,

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of the

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period

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TV and movies made up the biggest part of the chart and video games were the least significant segment. Tv and movies accounted for 14.3% in 1980

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and experienced an increase to 22.9% in 2020. At the beginning of the

period

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, books and working out both made up 14.3%. of the primary

hobbies

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, and these segments rose to 19% and 15.7% respectively in 2020. Baking which comprised 14.3% percentage of

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adults'

hobbies

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in 1980, had a slight decrease of 1.41% in 2020. In 1980, Primary

hobbies

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outcome from

gardenin

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gardening

and video games both were at 14.3%, and fell to 9.6% and 5.7 % respectively after 40-

year

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a year

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period

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, playing music remained constant in both years at 14.3%.

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