Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
In
this
globalised era, tourism has emerged with all its scope throughout the world
and this
trend allows the exposure of various customs
, traditions, lifestyles and behaviour. The people who are usually very conservatives
support the argument that foreigners should follow the Fix the agreement mistake
conservative
host
countries
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countries'
country's
culture
. On the other hand
, many others have a different view and they opine that the host
country
should welcome the
foreign cultures. Correct article usage
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essay will analyse both these views.To start with, young tourists mostly have no issues to follow
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host
countries
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countries'
country's
culture
as it will help them to blend with the society so easily. Moreover
, it is the
effective way to reduce racism, prejudices, and social barriers. The one who proclaims a "single Correct article usage
an
world
culture
" can adopt the host
countries
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countries'
country's
customs
and local behaviour, which maintain harmony among nations and will foster the healthy relationship between countries
. There are some tourists who do not abide by the rules and customs
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might create problems as they
local people would not easily welcome them. Correct your spelling
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might destroy the local way of living and might influence the new generations to adopt the
foreign cultures. Correct article usage
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Thus
it is indeed a pressing issue. However
, those who see "unity in diversity" will definitely deny single
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world
culture
because it can ruin the cultural heritage which is the uniqueness of a particular country
. I think uniform world
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do not have equilibrium to survive. The biodiversity keeps the ecosystem and environment exemplify Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
this
. From this
ground, the tourists should follow some of the local customs
. Finally
, the host
country
can accept cultural
differences of the people who visit their Correct article usage
the cultural
country
. It is what
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actually
essential in these days of conflicts and competition among nations. Once the cultural differences are Add a missing verb
is actually
being
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tourism
industry and Correct article usage
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overall
growth of the Correct article usage
the overall
country
.To conclude, as far as I wish to keep uniqueness
of my cultural heritage I will welcome other cultures, but never adopt those.Add an article
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