Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In

this

globalised era, tourism has emerged with all its scope throughout the

world

and

this

trend allows the exposure of various

customs

, traditions, lifestyles and behaviour. The people who are usually very

conservatives

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support the argument that foreigners should follow the

host

countries

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countries'

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culture

.

On the other hand

, many others have a different view and they opine that the

host

country

should welcome

the

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foreign cultures.

This

essay will analyse both these views.To start with, young tourists mostly have no issues

to follow

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the

host

countries

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culture

as it will help them to blend with the society so easily.

Moreover

, it is

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effective way to reduce racism, prejudices, and social barriers. The one who proclaims a "single

world

culture

" can adopt the

host

countries

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customs

and local behaviour, which maintain harmony among nations and will foster the healthy relationship between

countries

. There are some tourists who do not abide by the rules and

customs

the

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host

country

has

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.

This

might create problems as

they

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local people would not easily welcome them.

The exposure

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of

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too much alien

culture

might destroy the local way of living and might influence the new generations to adopt

the

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foreign cultures.

Thus

it is indeed a pressing issue.

However

, those who see "unity in diversity" will definitely deny

single

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single-world

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world

culture

because it can ruin the cultural heritage which is the uniqueness of a particular

country

. I think uniform

world

culture

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cultures

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do not have equilibrium to survive. The biodiversity keeps the ecosystem and environment exemplify

this

. From

this

ground, the tourists should follow some of the local

customs

.

Finally

, the

host

country

can accept

cultural

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differences of the people who visit their

country

. It is

what

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actually

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essential in these days of conflicts and competition among nations. Once the cultural differences are

being

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accepted by a nation; that approach itself opens the development of

tourism

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the tourism

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industry and

overall

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the overall

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growth of the

country

.To conclude, as far as I wish to keep

uniqueness

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the uniqueness

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of my cultural heritage I will welcome other cultures, but never adopt those.