Some people argue that globalisation has been a great benefit to people around the world, while others believe that it is the cause of many of the problems we see today. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays a lot of people have been working from

home

according

with

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development

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the development

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of technology.But there are workers, who

thinks

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think

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, that

this

is bad and can negatively affect your health and mental state.Both of these opinions have disadvantages and of course positive things. On the one hand, working from

home

is more comfortable and

save

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a lot of your

time

, you don’t need to have

a preparing hours

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a preparing hour

preparing hours

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. You

won’t

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want

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have to

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to

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apply

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stay in traffics and lose

time

on the way there.

Also

, if you have really important things, you can easy to do them while working.Or,

for example

,

spend

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your

time

with family or friends will get easier.

On the other hand

, sometimes you want to go out and communicate with your partners and colleagues.Regular staying at

home

is not good for your physical and mental health.

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,

usually

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,usually

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when you working at

home

you need a computer.If you work on it all day, your eyesight may be badly damaged. Sometimes due staying at

home

for a lot of hours or days may lead to headaches. Personally for me, working at

home

is so boring and not productive.Sometimes it can be really hard to force yourself to work and

doing

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something.As well, I am

such

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apply

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a person, who finds it difficult to be alone for a long period of

time

. From my experience,

last

year I’m studying at

home

and always I can’t concentrate on my subjects and understand new themes not very

good

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well

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. In conclusion, I want to say, that there is a choice

of

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for

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everyone.But I prefer to go out

from

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of

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my

home

and work or study hard.